An enjoyable read so far. I liked Alicia getting lost at sea, as well as Whitley's eating contest. The touch of realism with her actually feeling the effects of such a heavy meal was a nice touch. The hall of mirrors scene was a fun little adventure as well, and made for some fun dialogue.

I'm flattered you'd write fiction based on my characters, and you've done nice work with the interplay between them. Keep it up!